5.      Reflective language

 

Tone of Reflective Writing: Personal & Formal

  • Reflections are subjective, whereas academic essays usually need to be objective. In reflective writing, you are expected to reflect on your personal experience and how you felt about things you did. So your writing should be personal

 

Use first-person pronouns, i.e., ‘I’, ‘me’, ‘we’ and ‘our’.  You are reflecting on yourself,     

      your thoughts, and your understanding, so using the first person is not only

      acceptable, but expected.

 

  • Although reflective writing is a personal exercise, it should still be a formal piece of academic writing.  You still need to write in complete, grammatically correct sentences with accurate spelling and punctuation.  To make your language sound as formal as possible, you should avoid using language features that are characteristic of spoken casual conversation, such as:

 

colloquial or slang words (e.g. use ‘dismiss’ instead of ‘sack’)

contractions (e.g. use ‘cannot’ instead of ‘can’t’)

abbreviations (e.g. use ‘laboratory’ instead of ‘lab’)

spoken-like grammatical structures such as run-on sentences or sentence fragments

 

Language points when describing your experience

  • Almost always use the past tense (e.g. ‘I saw …’, ‘I noticed …’, ‘I/ they said …’, ‘I had …’, ‘I/ they did …’, ‘I heard …’)

 

Language points when interpreting your experience

1.    For me, the [most]
,important
insightful
interesting
meaningful
relevant significant 
useful
,aspect(s)
element(s)
experience(s)
idea(s)
issue(s)
,learning,was (were) …,arose from …
happened when …
resulted from …
,2.
,In the past, Previously, 
At first,
Initially,
At the time,
Next,
Subsequently,Later,
Afterwards, 
Eventually,
,I
,felt (did not feel) …
knew (did not know) …
noticed (did not notice) …
questioned (did not question) …
realised (did not realise) …
thought (did not think) …
is perhaps
is probably
may be
might be
could be
3.    This
attributed to 
because of …
due to …
explained by …
related to …
4.    This
demonstrates …
means …
reveals …
shows …
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Language points when evaluating the effectiveness

1.    Having
,analysed …
applied …
discussed … 
discovered …
experienced …
felt …
learned …
noticed …
observed …
reflected …
read …
feel …
know …
question …
realise …
think …
understand …
wonder …
I now
2.
,Furthermore, 
In addition, Moreover, 
Most importantly,
I have learned that …
adapted
changed
developed
learned
improved
realised
3.    As a result, I have
slightly
generally
significantly
definitely
my ability to …
my knowledge of …
my skills in …
my understanding of ….
This means that …
This makes me feel …
4.    This
ability
knowledge
skill
understanding
 skilldemonstrates …
means …
reveals …
shows …
essential
important
necessary
useful
is
could be
will be
to me because …
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Language points when outlining your plans

     Since I ,did not …
have not yet …
am not certain about …
am not confident about …
do not yet know …
do not yet understand …
I now need to …
I aim to …
I want to …
I will …
I should …
adapt …
change …
develop …
improve …
learn …
I want to …
I will …
I should …
As a next step
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